Immerse

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-6Dxlg8HeUrJS0w3at6YBwH2CH2jU-o0vx777k3cwZk/edit?hl=en_GB&authkey=CJq3o-8P

In LA class, we have a hw assignment -vocab words. 10 every 2 weeks. We had to fill out a pictionarydictionary and write a story with all 10 words. Well, for the last 5 assignments I've been doing a continuing story. I think it'll be interesting for you to see how well I manage to cram words like legerdemain and vicissitude into a flowing story. Or at least... I hope it flows. =/

COMMENTS/REVIEWS/PLENTY OF CRITISM needed! I want to see what you think of how my writing changed over 10 weeks. Better, worse, just tell me. ^^